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24 December 2007 @ 12:17 pm
Harry Potter: Five Reasons Why Lily Evans Does Not Like Sirius Black (And Five Reasons Why She Does)  
Title: Five Reasons Why Lily Evans Does Not Like Sirius Black (And Five Reasons Why She Does)
Author: papered
Fandom: Harry Potter
Characters/Pairing: Sirius/Lily
Rating: PG
Word Count: 3374
Summary: Sirius Black is infuriating in a way only he can be. And maybe that's why Lily Evans comes to like him.
Notes: Written for quidditchkiss for Christmas 2007, and I had a surprisingly enjoyable time writing a pairing I wouldn't usually write. :)

Everyone thought Sirius Black was a charmer. Everyone but the Slytherins and Lily Evans, that is.Collapse )
 
 
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LuminaBlackcousin_of_black on December 28th, 2007 12:46 am (UTC)
That story was so cute! The characterisation was great, and the build up slow and soooo delicious to read! Great work!
没有你日子很黑白: [Carter] sidecrop (red/blue)papered on December 28th, 2007 01:06 am (UTC)
Thank you for reading! :D
Starbuck: miss her lillyworldwasasong on December 29th, 2007 06:21 am (UTC)
Very sweet! I like it.
没有你日子很黑白: [SPN] 2.22; Sam green eyespapered on December 29th, 2007 06:25 am (UTC)
I'm glad, TY! ♥
Austinjohnmayergirl23 on December 29th, 2007 03:50 pm (UTC)
Loved it.

Even thought it had things I despise in a fanfic (a "Lily vs. Evans" James moment, a "Sirius/serious" joke, a pairing other than L/J...), I absolutely loved it. Very cute, very believable, which is hard to come by these days.

The sight of Sirius and Remus rolling around in the snow is definitely easy to picture! And the dialogue was good--very believable of teenagers.

Great job!
没有你日子很黑白: [SPN] quote; really pretty surepapered on December 30th, 2007 02:25 am (UTC)


It makes it all the more flattering that you thought this fic to be believable overall, even with your fanfic pet peeves. :) Thanks for reading!
expo: house - oh boy you're goodpoptartmuse on December 29th, 2007 04:06 pm (UTC)
my favorite as well! brilliant job, I love how you wrote Sirius :D
没有你日子很黑白: [Gaspard] half-croppapered on December 30th, 2007 02:28 am (UTC)
:D I'm glad you enjoyed!
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没有你日子很黑白: [Bledel] plaid; light texturepapered on December 30th, 2007 02:29 am (UTC)
It's my first time writing this pairing, so I'm glad you liked it. :) Thanks for reading!
Rita: { Harry Potter } Now or neverritinha on December 30th, 2007 10:58 pm (UTC)
Oh this is absolutely adorable!
I loved it. OMG SO CUTE ♥
没有你日子很黑白: [HP] quote; he knew you'd come backpapered on December 31st, 2007 12:15 am (UTC)
:D Thank you!
abi z: hpazephirin on January 1st, 2008 06:26 am (UTC)
So cute! I rarely read Sirius with anyone except Remus, but I am now completely ready to buy Sirius/Lily. I love Lily here, sort of cluelessly overcoming her reluctance. :)
没有你日子很黑白: [Bell] farshot; red and stripespapered on January 1st, 2008 08:11 am (UTC)
It's all the more flattering that this isn't a pairing you normally read. :D Thank you, and Happy New Year!
Bettabetta329 on January 1st, 2008 06:52 am (UTC)
That was amazing. I love the feelings and voices of Lily, ALice and Sirius. Amazing job!!
没有你日子很黑白: [Bledel] plaid; light texturepapered on January 1st, 2008 08:11 am (UTC)
Thank you! <3
Ashleyintrinsicwords on January 12th, 2008 02:58 am (UTC)
I don't think I've ever read a Sirius Lily before and I really enjoyed it. It was fantastic!
没有你日子很黑白: [Antoinette] facecrop; bed - fanpapered on January 12th, 2008 03:04 am (UTC)
It's my first time writing a Sirius/Lily fic too, so I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it. :) Thanks for taking the time to comment!

Also, I love your icon. <3
(no subject) - intrinsicwords on January 12th, 2008 02:55 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - papered on January 13th, 2008 07:53 am (UTC) (Expand)
.renataelliott on January 23rd, 2008 01:51 pm (UTC)
Aww. I love it with all my soul :3


Now I have two more reasons to dislike James ^.^

1. Mean to Snape
2. Gets in the way of every "Lily/___" ship I like
3. Quite a bit pompous through most of his school years

and now...

4. Gets in the way of Lilius. HAHAHA FUNNY NAME. OR Siry. HAHAHHAHHHAHHAHAHAAAA
5. Lily/James couple name = Lames!!! HAHAHAHAHAHA PWNED. (Or Jily, which is almost as stupid, but lacks any sort of pun found in LAMES hahahhaa.)
没有你日子很黑白: [Carter] sidecrop (red/blue)papered on January 26th, 2008 06:33 pm (UTC)
:) I'm glad you enjoyed, and thanks for reading! ♥
tigressgoesrawr on March 8th, 2008 04:47 pm (UTC)
That was great! I'm a big fan of pairings you don't see everywhere, so this was something I had to read. Great job!
没有你日子很黑白papered on March 8th, 2008 06:45 pm (UTC)
Thank you for reading! :)
iamtheheir: prevailiamtheheir on March 18th, 2008 01:47 pm (UTC)
and now i find i have another non-canon ship to add to the numerous ones i'm obsessed with. thankyou.

but seriously (lol, pwned), i love this!
lillyloo11lillyloo11 on June 15th, 2008 04:51 am (UTC)
omg. I loved this. Sirius/Lily ships are my fave. have any more?
没有你日子很黑白papered on June 18th, 2008 07:02 am (UTC)
Sadly, this is the only Sirius/Lily fic I have, as it was written for an Xmas request - but thank you for reading! :)
ybarakova on November 11th, 2008 09:02 am (UTC)
Asking permission for translation
Hello Liz,

I wish to translate Your fanf "Five Reasons Why Lily Evans Does Not Like Sirius Black (And Five Reasons Why She Does)". It was the first one for me with such interesting pairing and hoping not the last one.

It was pleasant to me personally and I would like to give another people possibility to read it. I wish to make translation on russian, for placing on a website http://www.hogwartsnet.ru/fanf/

Thanks for Your attention and I hope for a quick reply.

Kind regards, Julia

P.S. I hope you still reading this theme sometimes.
Astridpurple_ladybug1 on January 18th, 2009 04:42 am (UTC)
So cute! I love their interactions and how their friendship changes. Good work!